Converted (Poetry)
26th January 2014
The place was practically a ruin, of course
when first they saw it.
Picturesque in the sunlight
as ruins often are
with April’s needling shafts
making a colander of the holed roof
and silver spotting the floor
like a stopped mirror ball
in some deserted discotheque.
It had potential. It was enchanting.
They were in love — both
with each other and the barn
and the trees that leaned in
to welcome them.
Even the tall flowering weeds
added something —
the promise of rustic romance.
It took a lot of work
to make it pass for liveable —
to salvage and convert
then insulate for basic comfort
within the plans agreed and still
keep its agricultural charm
unspoilt and solid — all natural
wood and local stone.
They saved its simple features —
shaped it to a home
carved the date that they moved in
over the door
triumphant as new settlers
who have tamed their patch
of semi-wilderness.
At night the timbers creaked
and groaned
soft as any creature dreaming
and country smells arose —
the scent of hay
the sweet musk of dairy cows
spilling — spreading — hanging
a faint milky cloud.
Sometimes, too, the sound
of rhythmic chewing
soothing on the edge of sleep.
The barn held them all —
layered its many memories
and gave them shelter
offering room enough
and imagination
to share.
when first they saw it.
Picturesque in the sunlight
as ruins often are
with April’s needling shafts
making a colander of the holed roof
and silver spotting the floor
like a stopped mirror ball
in some deserted discotheque.
It had potential. It was enchanting.
They were in love — both
with each other and the barn
and the trees that leaned in
to welcome them.
Even the tall flowering weeds
added something —
the promise of rustic romance.
It took a lot of work
to make it pass for liveable —
to salvage and convert
then insulate for basic comfort
within the plans agreed and still
keep its agricultural charm
unspoilt and solid — all natural
wood and local stone.
They saved its simple features —
shaped it to a home
carved the date that they moved in
over the door
triumphant as new settlers
who have tamed their patch
of semi-wilderness.
At night the timbers creaked
and groaned
soft as any creature dreaming
and country smells arose —
the scent of hay
the sweet musk of dairy cows
spilling — spreading — hanging
a faint milky cloud.
Sometimes, too, the sound
of rhythmic chewing
soothing on the edge of sleep.
The barn held them all —
layered its many memories
and gave them shelter
offering room enough
and imagination
to share.